Every November, without fail, the swallows left.
Mia had watched them for as long as she could remember โ those flickering silhouettes gathering on the telegraph wire outside her bedroom window, packed shoulder to shoulder like commuters on a crowded platform. Then, one morning, they would be gone. The wire would be bare and humming in the cold wind, and the sky above the village would feel inexplicably emptier.
This year was different.
A single swallow remained after the others had departed. It sat hunched at the very end of the wire, its feathers ruffled against the October chill. Mia pressed her nose against the glass and watched it for so long that her breath misted the pane and she had to wipe it with her sleeve.
"Why haven't you gone?" she whispered.
The bird tilted its head, as though it had heard her perfectly well. Its dark eye caught the weak morning light and glittered.
Mia pulled on her coat and her wellies and stepped outside into the cold. The lane smelled of woodsmoke and wet leaves. She stood beneath the wire and looked up. The swallow looked down.
She couldn't explain what she did next โ she simply held out her arm.
The bird dropped from the wire in a single smooth arc, landed on her outstretched wrist, and folded its wings neatly, as if this were the most natural thing in the world.
For a long moment, neither of them moved. Mia could feel the tiny rapid pulse through her sleeve โ quick and insistent, like a whispered secret.
Then the swallow spread its wings, pushed off with its small claws, and was gone โ a dark comma flung southward into the pale sky, growing smaller and smaller until it vanished entirely.
Mia stood in the lane for a long time after, her arm still raised.
Barn swallows (Hirundo rustica) are among the most extraordinary travellers in the animal kingdom. Each year, these small birds โ weighing little more than a ยฃ1 coin โ undertake a round journey of up to 20,000 kilometres between their summer breeding grounds in Europe and their winter feeding grounds in sub-Saharan Africa.
How do they do it?
Scientists have identified several navigational tools that swallows and other migratory birds use to find their way. During the day, they use the position of the sun as a compass, adjusting their course as the sun moves across the sky. At night, some species navigate by the stars, using fixed celestial points to maintain direction. Remarkably, swallows are also sensitive to the Earth's magnetic field โ tiny magnetic particles in their beaks may allow them to detect magnetic north, essentially giving them a built-in compass.
Before their first migration, young swallows appear to have a rough map of the direction and distance they need to travel encoded in their genes. Experience then sharpens this map over subsequent journeys.
Weather plays a significant role too. Swallows typically wait for favourable winds before departing, and the timing of migration is closely linked to temperature and daylight hours. As the days shorten and temperatures drop in early autumn, hormonal changes trigger restlessness in the birds โ a state that scientists call Zugunruhe, from the German words for 'movement' and 'restlessness'.
Despite their extraordinary abilities, the journey is perilous. Swallows must cross deserts, mountains and open seas with limited opportunities to feed. Populations have declined significantly in recent decades, largely due to habitat loss and a reduction in the flying insects that make up their diet.
Yet every spring, those that survive return โ often to the very same barn, the very same rafter, where they nested the year before.
| Q | Model Answer | M | Notes for marker |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Commuters on a crowded platform | 1 | Must reference the simile. Full quote: "packed shoulder to shoulder like commuters on a crowded platform." |
| 2 | A single swallow was left behind after the others had gone | 1 | Accept any phrasing that identifies one swallow remaining when the rest had departed. |
| 3 | Any two from: watches them for years; stays at window until breath mists the glass; whispers to the bird; holds out her arm | 2 | 1 mark for each piece of evidence (max 2). Must be supported by text reference. |
| 4 | Woodsmoke and wet leaves | 1 | Must be a direct quote or close paraphrase of this phrase. |
| 5 | The pulse is quiet and intimate, suggesting a private moment / the bird is sharing something only Mia can feel | 2 | 1 mark for explaining the meaning; 1 mark for commenting on the effect created (e.g. intimacy, delicacy, closeness). |
| 6 | A dark comma flung southward into the pale sky | 1 | Must identify this as the metaphor (swallow compared to a comma). Accept if quoted accurately. |
| 7 | She was moved by the experience / didn't want the moment to end / was still processing what had happened | 1 | Accept any sensible inference about her emotional state. Must show understanding, not just quote. |
| Q | Model Answer | M | Notes for marker |
|---|---|---|---|
| 8 | Up to 20,000 kilometres | 1 | Must include 'up to' or recognise it is a round trip. Accept 20,000 km. |
| 9 | Any two: the sun / the stars / the Earth's magnetic field | 1 | Award 1 mark for any two correct navigation methods named. |
| 10 | Movement and restlessness | 1 | Both words required. Accept in either order. |
| 11 | They have a rough map of direction and distance encoded in their genes / instinct guides their first migration | 2 | 1 mark for 'encoded in genes' or 'instinct'; 1 mark for mentioning direction AND distance or explaining the map is refined by experience. |
| 12 | Shortening days (daylight hours) and dropping temperatures | 2 | 1 mark for each factor. Both must be identified for full marks. |
| 13 | Habitat loss OR reduction in flying insects | 1 | Either reason accepted. Must be from the text. |
| Q | Model Answer | M | Notes for marker |
|---|---|---|---|
| 14 | The non-fiction ends with emphasis on precision and loyalty; 'the very same barn, the very same rafter' โ creates wonder and hope | 2 | 1 mark for identifying the effect (wonder, precision, hope). 1 mark for close reference to the repeated phrase or the idea of survival. |
| 15 | Text 1: swallow behaves almost magically (lands on arm); Text 2: extraordinary navigation abilities, 20,000 km journey, genetic map | 3 | 3 marks: 1 for a valid point from Text 1 with evidence; 1 for a valid point from Text 2 with evidence; 1 for making a comparison or link between the two texts. |